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At the North Texas Book Festival, April 11, 2015

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on April 8, 2015 by Michael D. SmithJune 27, 2019
The Martian Marauders Coffee Cup

The Martian Marauders Coffee Cup

I will represent Double Dragon Publishing as well as my own fledgling invention, Sortmind Press, at the North Texas Book Festival in Denton, Texas, on Saturday, April 11. The festival takes place at the Patterson-Appleton Center for the Visual Arts, 400 E. Hickory St., Denton, Texas 76201. Hours are 9 AM – 4 PM.

I’ll be selling paperback copies of the three published novels in my Jack Commer science fiction series:

  1. The Martian Marauders
  2. Jack Commer, Supreme Commander
  3. Nonprofit Chronowar

 

The First Twenty Steps in paperback

A Stark Pile of Twenty Steps

In addition, I’ll have newly-printed paperback copies available of my novella The First Twenty Steps from Sortmind Press. Note that the only other work published by Sortmind Press so far is the infamous Trip to Mars, The Picture Book, a demented prequel to the Jack Commer series which I’ll eventually make into an eBook and paperback, but which right now only exists as a YouTube video. There are some daunting aspects of children’s books I haven’t figured out yet!

Sortmind Press Logo

The New Sortmind Press Logo

Anyway, at least Sortmind Press has its own logo now. The paperback edition of The First Twenty Steps seemed to mandate a logo, so here it is to the right.

I’ll also have promotional materials at the festival for other Double Dragon authors who’ve written some excellent fantasy, science fiction, paranormal romance, and horror.

Here’s the URL for the North Texas Book Festival which includes location, time, authors attending, and background info:

http://www.ntbf.org/

copyright 2015 by Michael D. Smith

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Homage Part 1: Farewell to The University of Mars

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on April 4, 2015 by Michael D. SmithDecember 25, 2024
The University of Mars copyright 1980 Michael D. Smith

The University as conceived in 1980

I culled this post from the sortmind.com University of Mars page. I’ve always enjoyed this essay as a solid analysis of an unpublishable old novel, but it’s really a blog post, lost on a bazillion pages on sortmind.com, so I’m moving it here with much updating.

I wrote the original essay right before the 2009 revision of the novel, but I’ve brought it up to date to reflect the fact that, while in 2009 I judged the 1984 University of Mars to be an unpublishable novel, I’ve long since drawn the conclusion that the 2009 revision is also unpublishable. But the extended struggle over this novel taught me a lot about writing, so I pay homage to it here.

A Good Heart, But Dense and Confused

There was a good-hearted book somewhere in the 320-page typewritten manuscript of The University of Mars. Eleven people read the finished second draft, laughing in the right places and generally complimenting the work, and I was ready to type it and send it to publishers.

It was the first novel I ever submitted for publication. I sent queries to twenty-three publishers and one agent between 1984 and 1986; three of the submissions consisted of mailing the entire novel. The last rejection was November 1986, from the $45 agent.

I could spend a lot of time on the $45 agent. His response incensed me, as he obviously hadn’t bothered to read more than a few pages for his fee, and instead turned the book over to his assistant, who clearly didn’t read much further. They contented themselves with a rich deconstruction of the first two manuscript pages, which in retrospect is an ironic comeuppance for someone who regularly used this trick with English papers at Rice University.

Oddly, the agent’s belabored assertion that the first page’s “Bill felt like” must read “Bill felt as if” is the only comment I remembered for years. Despite my initial defensiveness that the criticism was unfair because Bill was “thinking colloquially” in the first paragraph, I knew I’d been ungrammatical and I’ve since become a stickler for the correct use of “as if.” Even though many writers feel as if that’s not important.

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On Finishing a First Draft

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on March 13, 2015 by Michael D. SmithJuly 12, 2020

Marsport copyright 2009 by Michael D. SmithI just finished Draft 1 of Commer of the Rebellion, Book 6 in the Jack Commer series. It’s too early to judge what sort of novel this is, or even if COTR will remain the final title. I’m already feeling relief at being able to forget it for a while. As far as I can tell this feels like a good novel, but I wouldn’t inflict it on anyone in its current state. I also don’t feel up to writing a synopsis yet, since the Draft 1 plot will be changing; I’ve preferred to showcase the characters on the sortmind.com Commer of the Rebellion page and in some blog posts.

Most Draft 1 chapters seem high-energy to me, but I also know there’s been a lot of deletable meandering about the workings of the SolGrid telepathic network, how it differs from the Alpha Centaurian version and how it relates to the established, merely digital SolNet network, and what’s really psychically wrong with the Martians–and how do I explain characters who had seemingly infinite powers in previous novels but who are now mentally crippled? [Drawback to characters with seemingly infinite powers: there’s no longer any conflict for the story!] But I do like the ending as it came together over the past couple weeks–it was not the feel-good, conceptual idea-fest I’d feared it might be from the plot notes I’d made in August.

I had no idea COTR would run to 414 pages, 102,188 words–but I doubt it will remain that length. I’d thought the entire book might be in the 250-page range, but a month ago, having finished twenty-nine chapters, I was surprised to see that I was at 295 pages with fourteen more chapter concepts to go, and that I might easily double the size of the novel, since any chapter concept has usually led to three or more written chapters. Characters had continued to surprise me and broaden the novel from the beginning, but my notes for these last chapters looked to be merely restating things the novel had already covered, and it was time to tighten all that up. Some new right and left brained thinking was needed.

I often gag at the commonplace assertion from writers about how the characters mystically take over the novel, etc., etc., but unfortunately it’s one of those clichés that happens to be true. And maybe I had too many characters in this novel and they all started yammering for attention like candidates at a political convention that threatened to never end. The whole point of any novel is to explore characters, but then again there’s an overall structure of meaning you have a responsibility to provide.

In addition to numerous USB backups, I also print out, in single spaced Times New Roman 10, an archival Draft 1 that would, in the event of all computers everywhere crashing, function as the ultimate backup. Rereading the print copy is a refreshing change from editing on the computer; you can circle errors but the print keeps you from charging in and digitally editing when you really need to be taking a break from all that. Since the print is generated chapter by finished chapter and I revise items in earlier chapters as I go along, the print doesn’t entirely correspond to the final first digital draft, but that’s okay. I may or may not reread this print copy shortly; I find I’m looking forward to it while at the same time resisting the urge. Draft 1 consciousness is done, and Draft 2 consciousness isn’t available yet.

Typhoon V, VI, VII copyright 2014 Michael D. Smith

The Typhoon VI does survive Book 6

One of the amusing, delicious, frustrating aspects of a rough draft is that as the pages accumulate into the two hundred/three hundred page range, I forget earlier parts of the novel except in the vaguest sense; I can navigate, sometimes with difficulty, back to earlier chapters in order to prepare for a fresh writing session relating to previous events, but I’m always surprised by what I rediscover. So rereading COTR will be somewhat like reading a novel written by someone else. I try to relax and enjoy the first read-through; this isn’t a time for wincing at awful mistakes or for making detailed revision notes.

I have just a bare outline of Draft 2 notes. But I know there’s a reason for writing this novel and that it’s not simply to Continue the Series and Throw It Out There to the Internet Wolves. Draft 2 will come at the appropriate time to investigate and clarify that reason.

Through most of COTR I was wondering whether Book 6 would be the end of the series, whether I had anything else to say about Jack Commer and his space opera universe. But ideas for a Book 7 have come up through this novel; in fact, Amav states the premise in the closing chapters. Continuing the character of the dead Jim Commer from Book 1 was a great suggestion from a reviewer, and will probably feed into Amav’s new ambitions.

However, I also have some non-science fiction writing to attend to before any Book 7. You can add psychological expressiveness to a genre novel, but that has its limits. Characters in science fiction are subject to so many outlandish experiences that trying to accurately portray their inner lives is difficult; realistically, they probably all need decades of psychotherapy instead of a quick blast off for the next mind-bending adventure. Some more literary efforts are probably needed to ground this author.

copyright 2015 by Michael D. Smith

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Warning: You Will Want to Read the Entire Series!

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on February 22, 2015 by Michael D. SmithJuly 12, 2020

Author Linda Nightingale’s review of The Martian Marauders, Book One of the Jack Commer, Supreme Commander series:

 The Martian Marauders by Michael D. SmithVarious reviews here have summarized the story. I won’t repeat the details here. I’ll just say that there is much more to this book than is implied because you wouldn’t want a plot spoiler anyway, and no one had done that. I loved Jack. His ineptness with women was charming in a way, and his shaky fate with Amav was both intriguing—will he win the girl of his dreams—and amusing. From the first paragraph to the last, the characters and their tale will keep you turning pages. I read the book in one day. That’s a record for me. I got into Martian Marauders and couldn’t put it down. There are many smiles on the pages of the book—like the interview with Huey Vespertine. I actually laughed aloud, yet I shed a tear or two earlier. Mr. Smith knows his stuff, both the craft of writing and the technology required to fabricate an enthralling sci-fi. I’m on to the next in the series! Join me in following the adventures of Jack Commer. You won’t regret a single second.

Review on Goodreads

Linda B. Nightingale writes paranormal romance and dark fantasy and is published by Double Dragon Publishing.

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It’s about Time … and about Space …

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on February 11, 2015 by Michael D. SmithJuly 11, 2020

Another review by author Toni V. Sweeney, this time for the third volume in the Jack Commer series, Nonprofit Chronowar.

Nonprofit Chronowar by Michael D. SmithNonprofit Chronowar by Michael D. Smith

5 Stars

One minute it’s the year 2036 and Joe Commer is about to consummate his lust for Huey Vespertine’s wife Jackie … the next, he finds himself at the podium of the 2020 CTESOPE … The Committee to End Suffering on Earth. What follows is a comedy of errors as well as numerous tragedies as Joe realizes he isn’t in love with Jackie but with her sister Ranna, who is head of CTESOPE and also will die in the mass evacuation of Earth shortly before Joe and Jack drop the Xon bomb on the planet.

In no time at all, thanks to Heuristic Time Transition, which everyone knows exists but all deny, Joe, Ranna’s lovestruck assistant Urside, his girlfriend Mandy, and various other participants are hopping all over the Space-Time Continuum, trying to find themselves, and each other, and make certain everyone who should survives the destruction awaiting the Earth in three years …

Meanwhile, back in 2036, what about this Celestion business?

… and what does Ranna’s cat Churchill have to do with any of it?

Again, this is another Jack Commer novel which is difficult to synopsize. We learn Joe has resigned from the USSF. He’s now partners with Huey Vespertine in a GaiaNet radio show. The Alpha Centauri-Earth peace is holding … or is it?

Joe Commer at the 2020 CTESOPE ConferenceThe rest of the gang, from Martian Emperor Dar to Jack himself and all characters in between, as well as some newcomers, are all in attendance. First and foremost, however, it’s Joe’s story and he runs with it … sometimes slightly amuck.

Don’t take my ramblings at face value. Read this entry in the series for yourself. It’s by far the best because it re-examines some of the things happening in the previous two and gives a little more explanation.

I’m not a fan of time travel stories because they’re usually so futile, but this one definitely has a ray of something that could be sunlight at the end of its tunnel. It ends as abruptly as the previous novel but indications are it’ll pick up immediately in the next, which I’m looking forward to reading.

I hope the title, Collapse and Delusion, is a misnomer.

Review on Goodreads

Review by Toni V. Sweeney


A note from Mike: Collapse and Delusion, the fourth novel in the Jack Commer series, is forthcoming from Double Dragon Publishing.

After focusing on the 2053 demise of the Alpha Centaurian empire, the second half of the novel moves to 2075, when Supreme Commander Jack Commer and his wife Amav journey to the paradise planet Andertwin for a painful visit with their reclusive son Jonathan James, infant survivor of an abduction by Alpha Centaurian security forces and now the author of a bestselling novel about the collapse of the Centaurian empire.

All the characters have been rejuvenated to be in their thirties even though many are approaching seventy by this time; I can probably keep the series going indefinitely this way!

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Commer of the Rebellion – Characters and Some Rough Draft, Part II

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on February 6, 2015 by Michael D. SmithJuly 12, 2020

More characters from the first draft of Jack Commer #6, Commer of the Rebellion, now about three-quarters completed.

Robot Dog Edward copyright 2015 Michael D. Smith

Robot Dog Edward

Joe wondered whether Jack even considered how a dog was going to pack a USSF flight valise, and whether Amav had ever revealed that all four of Edward’s paws could extend into full human hand functions, that the dog could stand erect on its hind feet, and, as Amav had told Joe, could fling two thousand Ninja throwing stars nailing an outline of the Mona Lisa on a wall–in fifteen seconds. She thought Jack was too proud to admit the need for any sort of bodyguard, but hell, he was the SCUSSF, wasn’t he? Who knew what sort of crackpot might try to target the Supreme Commander’s house, no matter how many security force fields and AI sensors it had?

 

Admiral Joe Commer copyright 2014 Michael D. Smith

Admiral Joe Commer

 

Any human could pick up Martian outradiance, but Joe, like Amav, was among those people who were unusually sensitive to it. The two of them had discussed how they’d been feeling an underlying disturbance, a foundational cracking, beneath the eons-long structure of Martian confidence. Martians were having trouble concentrating on basic tasks, but it wasn’t from some euphoria or simple unwillingness to take responsibility. More than one Martian had broadcast directly into Joe’s mind the concept that they felt a diminishing force at work within them.

 

 

Major Richard Ballard copyright 2014 Michael D. Smith

Major Richard Ballard

Laurie and her Sensor Officer friend had joked about the number of women Ballard seemed to go through each month and both had sworn they’d never fall for his clumsy advances. Of course Laurie was starting to date Will at the time so there was no danger of her succumbing in any case, but she was worried about Sandra, who was able to laugh about Ballard’s painfully insincere come-ons even as a note of drool came into her voice as she graphically commented how his massive pecs and biceps were somehow incongruously perfectly perched atop the thinnest waist and the most perfectly formed male tush she’d ever seen.

Colonel Laurie Lachrer, Physician/Engineer copyright 2013 Michael D. Smith

Colonel Laurie Lachrer, Physician/Engineer

 

Laurie nodded. Though she knew Jack and Joe had both briefly dipped into the Sol and AC versions of the Grid so they could have an idea of what they were all about, she herself hadn’t been tempted by either. She had a vision of going insane for all eternity and she didn’t think that would look good on her résumé as a USSF Physician/Engineer.

Lieutenant Sandra Markham copyright 2014 Michael D. Smith

Lieutenant Sandra Markham

 

 

Sandra was now officially in love. “We talked,” she’d said. “We talked about everything. He’s finally ready to settle down. He realized he needs just one woman, and it’s me. Who’d ever have thought it? It does need to be secret for now–we both know that.” Laurie hadn’t said a word. Though she came off as so brainy and systems-oriented that most people, including female USSF, assumed that she wasn’t up for girl chitchat, Laurie nevertheless attracted it and many women had complimented her on being such a good listener.

Robot John J. Douglas copyright 2014 Michael D. Smith

Robot John J. Douglas

 

“Take it easy for a minute while we scan you,” said robot John J. Douglas, leaning over her. She had a hard time bringing his huge white handlebar mustache into focus. “We’re having some trouble with the static ourselves, my lady, but our internal med scanners are working … damn slow, I’ll admit! No broken bones that I can see.”

 

Sanders Hirte copyright 2014 Michael D. Smith

Sanders Hirte

 

 

Sanders Hirte was almost entirely tattoos, in every color imaginable, with so many images twining across his flawless hard muscles that Jackie Vespertine could hardly make sense of what she was seeing: silver spaceships and ringed planets, unfurling Latin, German, and Russian mottos, soldiers with shatter-enhanced EOS rifles, exploding armored personnel carriers …

copyright 2014 by Michael D. Smith

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New Jack Commer Reviews Energize the Author

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on January 24, 2015 by Michael D. SmithJuly 11, 2020

Author Toni Sweeney just posted the following reviews of the first two books in the Jack Commer series, The Martian Marauders and Jack Commer, Supreme Commander, and she’s nailed the dynamics of both novels in a way that I don’t think I’ve done myself. In some strange way these reviews almost make me feel that all this writing effort is somehow worthwhile! I say this tongue in cheek, but there’s some truth to it.

The Jack Commer, Supreme Commander series might be classified as space opera but I always want that psychological exploration in the foreground. And also the humor; my favorite feedback is to watch someone reading my stuff and laughing out loud. Most reviews of the three books published so far in the series have picked up on these qualities, and all have been illuminating for me. On to Ms. Sweeney’s reviews:

The Martian Marauders by Michael D. SmithThe Martian Marauders by Michael D. Smith

This was a very difficult book to review, not because it isn’t good, because it’s definitely that—in fact I liked it so much I went on to read the second book in the series—but because there’s so much going on. It’s like trying to watch three ping-pong games at once. Summarizing the plot is just as complicated…

Earth is currently in the Final War with Alpha-Centauri. Pluto and several of the outer planets have been pulled out of orbit and destroyed, the moon is gone, and after removal of all its inhabitants to Mars, the USSF (United System Space Force) has demolished Earth and made it uninhabitable.

In the center of this chaos are the four Commer brothers. There’s Jack, the eldest, a 30-year-old near-virgin with daddy-issues. Jack’s also captain of the Typhoon, and had the dubious honor of dropping the Xon bomb on his home planet. Second brother Joe is co-pilot of the Typhoon, a womanizer who likes to brag about his conquests, and in doing so wonders if he might have let Ms Right get away. Then there’s Jim, and baby brother John Jr., who, it appears, would be more at home on a psychiatrist’s couch than as the pilot of a battleship. John Jr. won’t obey direct orders, talks back to his commanding officer, has an attention-span of zero and apparently the only thing between him and a court martial is his senator father’s influence. In fact, John Jr. shouldn’t be trusted with anything more dangerous than a toothpick, as later actions will unfortunately show.

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NOW! – or – Early Marketing Efforts

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on January 15, 2015 by Michael D. SmithJanuary 15, 2015
NOW!  The official Trip to Mars movie poster copyright 2015 Michael D. Smith

NOW! The official Trip to Mars movie poster

Not long ago I was astonished to rediscover childhood Jack Commer marketing tools. As outlined elsewhere, my first Jack Commer, Supreme Commander plots unfolded in the fifth grade, and by the eighth I’d abandoned the draft of The Martian Marauders at 110 pages, eventually returning to it a few years ago and seeing it published as a modern science fiction novel.

Nevertheless the evidence clearly demonstrates that I had a vigorous marketing campaign in gear even in 1965. The following samples show the influence of advertising I was exposed to as a child. They reflected my joy in writing but probably also compensated for the fact that I had little confidence in my everyday kid self. But I also I think I’m seeing hints of mockery, of fledgling satire, at work here.

The Official Jack Commer Space Stories Logo, ca. 1965 copyright 2015 Michael D. Smith

The Official Jack Commer Space Stories Logo, ca. 1965

The ads postulated new titles I can’t recall planning, and assumed that my novels and stories would naturally be translated into movie form. Of course! There was even a Jack Commer logo showing Jack Commer and his spaceship as the prime connection between the ruined Earth and humanity’s new life on Mars.

While these advertising efforts didn’t exactly seed demand for my work–I can’t recall any saturation coverage of my stories in mid-sixties magazines and television–they did remain safely stashed in ancient folders, stalking me for decades so that one day they could confound and embarrass me.

copyright 2015 by Michael D. Smith

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Commer of the Rebellion – Characters and Some Rough Draft, Part I

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on December 21, 2014 by Michael D. SmithJuly 12, 2020

Some characters from the first draft of Jack Commer #6, Commer of the Rebellion, now in progress. The text is taken from the rough draft, about two hundred pages so far, and is obviously open to revision.

Jack Commer, Supreme Commander, United System Space Force, 2076

Jack Commer, Supreme Commander, United System Space Force, 2076

We had the most amazing talk this afternoon! Lying there naked in the sun! About me finally being able to quit! Could I really do it? Am I really ready? Didn’t I tell her I was? Then I get this goddamn call and she runs off to Venus and she’s pissed off?

Amav Frankston-Commer, Jack’s Wife, Planetary Engineer

Amav Frankston-Commer, Jack’s Wife, Planetary Engineer

 

“It’s so stupid!” Amav snarled. “So goddamn stupid! He just faked his way through all that counseling! Nodding and smiling to everyone, telling everybody what they wanted to hear–and now this! Damn him to hell! I’m not gonna figure this one out for Jack! I just refuse!”

 

 

 

 

Jonathan James Commer, Jack and Amav’s Son and Former Emperor of Alpha Centauri

Jonathan James Commer, Jack and Amav’s Son and Former Emperor of Alpha Centauri

Before this day, if anyone on SolNet had paid attention to Jack Commer’s son, it was to ruefully muse about how Jonathan James had emerged non compos mentis from his stunt in Alpha Centauri, what an egomaniacal fool he’d been to try to become Emperor, and it served him right to have his brains burned out, and weren’t his father’s brains also burned out by this time and shouldn’t he get lost along with his son and scheming wife and sycophantic kid brother Joe as well? But now there appeared to be at least a hundred Jonathan James Commer fan clubs, all urging him, the Typhoon II, and its “jolly mad crew” on to glory. “The Rebellion is Now! The Rebellion is Us!” clamored one particularly effective post by Salla Hurtif, a young female SolNet commentator Pat had always had the hots for.

 

Jackie Vespertine, Professor of Exobiology at the University of Mars

Jackie Vespertine, Professor of Exobiology at the University of Mars

“Now that’s one solid female! Or at least I thought she was! Could she really have gone off the deep end like that? I gotta tell ya, Laurie, honestly, like a man says to a woman he really respects and admires, I really have had the hots for Jackie for years now! I mean, what a chassis! Even Suzette lookin’ like a damn teenager can’t hold a candle to her! Face it, Jackie Vespertine is, like, perfection! She always has been! Her rejuvenation was, like, classic! Didn’t take away from that classy sexiness of hers, like you know, man to woman now, just being honest, you know! I mean, she’s never given me the time of day but I think she knows I’d be after her if I could. Man, oh man!”

 

 

Patrick James, President of SolGrid, Inc.

Patrick James, President of SolGrid, Inc.

 

Wait! I see the hack! Just align it with the probability of–yeah! And Feedback Stasis would do that! Okay! So IF SDCloak > 0 THEN Comm:Merge;// {CALL VectorAlign, ELSE FeedbackStatis} :** CALL L-SpacialLoop}. THAT’S what I was missing! Okay! Test.

Suzette Borman, Lee Borman’s Wife and Jonathan James’ Lover

Suzette Borman, Lee Borman’s Wife and Jonathan James’ Lover

 

“Well, she can’t touch me and she knows it! I have all my forty-two years of experience with men, repackaged with all my adolescent hormones just–just raging, Mr. Patster! You know, I can’t help but tell you that maybe something could have happened between you and me, dear, it’s just that–I can’t! I belong to JJC! Then again, who knows what might happen on this trip?”

“Who knows what might happen?” Suzette repeated. “To all of us?” She pulled his hands off her chest but held them for a few seconds before letting them drop. “Jonathan James said I would be his Empress! Can you match that, dear Mr. Patster, with all your fourteen-year-old sex urges?”

 

Robot Laurie 283

Robot Laurie 283

“Well, when the Ywritt brought my John back to me, and I was so scrambled, and powered down, and so depressed, well, I realized I have a lot to answer for! I really messed up last year, and I realize I’ve got to atone! And so I’ve sworn to wear a 283 sweatshirt for the rest of my existence! That may sound strange, but actually, I have an endless supply of 283 sweatshirts in a hundred colors! A lot of ‘em are low cut, because I know John likes ‘em that way, but really, I figure everybody needs to know that it’s me, just a poor simple HAVOTT robot, not the real Laurie! I don’t want anyone to ever confuse us again!”

Z’B, Emperor of the Martians

Z’B, Emperor of the Martians

 

“WE ARE DONE WITH STAR DRIVE? THIS IS A CRAPPY SHIP WITH BAD STAR DRIVE!” came into Pat’s mind along with horrifyingly detailed mathematical proofs of the amount of suffering a Martian central nervous system could take before exploding.

 

Major Carla Posttner, Head of USSF Detention Services

Major Carla Posttner, Head of USSF Detention Services

“I knew you two had the whole USSF hierarchy in your pocket,” Posttner hissed. “Sir. And I knew you’d once again circumvent Detention Services protocols in the handling of your own son. I do note that you have failed to obtain Form 303, ‘Warrant for Fugitive Arrest,’ from DS and that apparently you’re not intending to arrest Jonathan James Commer as a common criminal. Therefore, jurisdiction would devolve upon the Court of the City of Marsport, and in my liaison capacity as Councilwoman for the Fourth District–”

copyright 2014 by Michael D. Smith

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Spaceships

Sortmind Blog - Michael D. Smith Posted on November 14, 2014 by Michael D. SmithJuly 12, 2020

Typhoon III Series copyright 2014 Michael D. SmithI recently realized that I keep blowing up expensive spaceships, and that there’s a new Typhoon spaceship (I, II, III, IV, V, VI) for every book in the Jack Commer, Supreme Commander series. Though I skipped a Typhoon in Book Three, I apparently unconsciously made up for that by having both a III and a IV in Book Four.

According to the received wisdom of the Jack Commer series, the Typhoon Project began in 2028 with the experimental Typhoon E (briefly alluded to in Book One, The Martian Marauders) and by 2033 the first operational version, Typhoon I, had demonstrated its ability to destroy the planet Earth with the Xon bomb. Its sister ship, the upgraded Typhoon II, was the theater stage for Jack Commer’s debacle-rich failure to negotiate an end to the Sol-Alpha Centaurian war in 2035.

I finally drew the 2028 Typhoon E experimental craft this year. I decided it should look appropriately clunky as a test bed for the first augmented nuclear drive engine and Xon bomb delivery system. Created during the buildup to war with the Central Asian Powers, it had 1/20 light speed, unheard of at that time, and a crew of four. Crews of both Typhoon I and Typhoon II rotated in and out of this project.

Typhoon E copyright 2014 Michael D SmithThe 1965 drawings of the Typhoon I and Typhoon II for the first childhood version of The Martian Marauders took care of any concerns I had visualizing the action for my childhood plot:

Typhoon I 1965 copyright 2014 Michael D SmithWhen I input the ancient manuscript into EasyWriter II in 1986, I traced and neatened the same drawings and, though crude, these sufficed to see me through the modern revision of The Martian Marauders in the early 2000’s.

But while working on later drafts of Book Two, Jack Commer, Supreme Commander, I needed a better grasp of the Pod, which was hastily engineered between summer 2034 and the beginning of the Typhoon II mission to Alpha Centauri in February 2035. From Book Two, Jack Commer, Supreme Commander:

He didn’t like the idea of a Pod attached to his sleek ship in the first place. It was like carting around a fashionable Marsport condominium, with its huge central recreation room, sixteen personal compartments for use by the three Martians and seven humans on the flight, as well as negotiation rooms where, everyone hoped, treaties would be hammered out with the Alpha Centaurians. The saucer had a kitchen, food to last several months, showers, exercise machines–and sixty-four Xon bombs in the lower compartment. These, added to the normal complement of four Xon bombs in the Typhoon II’s nose, along with the powerful pair of PlanetBlasters mounted on the back and belly of the craft, gave Jack the capability of destroying several solar systems in the course of an eight-hour work day–if negotiations failed.

Typhoon II and Pod copyright 2014 Michael D. SmithIn writing Book Three, Nonprofit Chronowar, I figured I should know how the evacuation passenger shells worked. Early 1964 drawings showing the full engine blast from the end of Typhoon I going straight through the passenger shell would obviously obtain fatal results for both shell and passengers, so I came up with a shell slung under the belly of the Typhoon, similar to how the Space Shuttle held its main fuel tank. Pegasus, the passenger shell mentioned in Nonprofit Chronowar, could hold 1,140 people. That particular shell would probably have to be somewhat larger than this model:

Typhoon I and Pegasus copyright 2004 by Michael D. SmithCollapse and Delusion, The Wounded Frontier, and Commer of the Rebellion all required ongoing development of the Typhoon series, and again I needed to nail down the theatrical stages on which the characters interacted. The Typhoon III series, designed in 2038, was a major upgrade in size, Star Drive propulsion, and weaponry, and by 2076 there were thirty-five Typhoon III-class ships, including the first two ships, Typhoon III and Typhoon IV.

Typhoon III Series copyright 2014 Michael D. SmithTyphoon V in 2075 and its descendants Typhoons VI and VII were another major design evolution, intended to move humanity beyond warfare in the immediate solar neighborhood to the exploration of distant star systems. To build the Typhoon V in 2075 cost roughly one-sixteenth of the Sol economy. The 2076 models, Typhoon VI and Typhoon VII, though the same size as the V, were vastly improved and were built faster and cheaper with the aid of new technologies from Iota Persei and explorers returning from the realm of Garr/thahg.

Typhoons V-VI-VII copyright 2014 Michael D. SmithI first drew the Typhoon I spaceship in childhood, as early as 1964, for there are drawings of the triangular-winged space plane in my sixth grade Trip to Mars. I knew at the time that there was a U.S. Air Force project, Dyna-Soar, a late fifties-early sixties precursor to the Space Shuttle, but though I seem to recall having an actual plastic model of it, I don’t think Dyna-Soar was a basis for the Typhoon design; though the two ships are close in size, they look quite different.

I drew the Typhoon I over and over, but this wasn’t my only spaceship. I recently unearthed from my archives over a hundred spaceship drawings from the sixties. While most were simply aesthetic reworking of existing multi-stage rocket ship designs you could get from any science fiction movie, some also sketched a rocket plane similar to the Typhoon:

One-Man Rocketplane 1967 copyright 2014 Michael D. SmithAll these designs showcase the difficulty of envisioning a three-dimensional spacecraft, with some sane chance of actually being able to fly, when you primarily want to draw a cool-looking, dangerous object. The Typhoon’s “augmented nuclear powered engine” and its subsequent Star Drive are ludicrously tiny, but that was part of the point, as even as a child I envisioned exponential technological growth in our near future.

Copyright 2014 by Michael D. Smith

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